Monday, 20 March 2017

Jack's Metaphors

 Jack's Poem 

 I am a Ferrari zooming like a shooting star. 
 I am a black panther lurking in the shadows waiting to pounce on    unexpected prey. 
 I am a soggy wet cheeseburger waiting to be eaten.
 I am an old forgotten jacket that someone left behind.   
   I am a skyscraper towering above the city and swaying in the wind.
I am a rushing river smashing into the rocks like a tank


  1. Hey Jack.
    Your metaphors are interesting to read, and put some strong images in my mind. I particularly like the strong, descriptive words you have used. Great work here.

    Whaea Jane

  2. Wow, interesting metaphors Jack. I liked the way you shared them with us in assembly.